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By
Jonathan Halls
Vodcasting is a fast growing medium. To exploit all it can
offer, you need to understand it as a medium.
This article focuses on scripting Presentation Vodcasts.
Pictures tell the story
While we can learn a lot of video storytelling techniques from
television, we must remember that vodcasting is not television. It’s
a different medium altogether. It is consumed differently and
it comes in a variety of shapes and formats.
The first thing to remember when you write a narration script
for your Vodcast is pictures are your primary storytelling
tool. The narration is merely a supporting actor while pictures
are the star.
When people consume video, they watch more than they listen.
They use more of their brain reviewing the pictures than
listening to the words.
In this sense, the rules for vodcasts are the opposite for
podcasts. The spoken word tends to be the principal storytelling
tool in podcasting. Pictures are the ‘storytelling workhorse’
for vodcasting.
When you write narration for a factual vodcast, you are not
writing poetry. It’s not literature. Your narration
picks up the story from where the pictures fall short and carries it
on.
Narration picks up where the picture falls short
For example, the picture of a traffic jam only tells us there is
a traffic jam. It doesn’t tell us that toll collectors are on
strike, or more people than expected were driving to see a
Madonna concert. These extra details are what your narration
picks up.
Remember also that vodcasts are not television. Generally
speaking, they will be shorter pieces of video that stand alone
and may not be part of a longer series of programs.
So here are a few tips for writing for video and vodcasts.
These are for scripting short factual presentation vodcasts.
Words
Choose simple words that are quick and easy for your viewer to
understand. Often, the best words are monosyllables. They’re
quick and easy to understand.
Add life to your narration by choosing verbs and nouns over
adjectives and adverbs. Avoid abstract nouns which lack
immediacy and instead use verbs.
Write short sentences with one clause. Sub clauses and
dependent clauses take longer for the brain to process and the
aim is for quick and easy comprehension.
Your viewer is spending more time reviewing the pictures and
less energy on the spoken word so we need to make it easy to
comprehend.
Be a scrooge when it comes to sentence construction. Examine
every sentence to see if you can shorten it by removing a word
or two.
Sentences
Interrogate each word by asking yourself, if this word wasn’t in
this sentence, would it change the meaning? If the answer is
no, chop it out.
Think about who will be narrating your script. Vocal expression
can often convey the meaning when you need to cut words.
Write the majority of your sentences in the active voice.
Occasional passive sentences are fine if you want to moderate
the pace or create a vocal effect.
Construct phrases that do not run into each other. For example,
“just as it is,” sounds like, “justice, it is.” “Attacks on
tourists,” sounds like “a tax on tourists.”
Always read your script aloud before recording it. Listen to be
sure your words are easy to recognize and the sentences flow
well.
Conversational tone
Write your video scripts in a conversational tone. Formality
may be appealing at first but it quickly becomes boring.
In the era of a vodcast, informality is important. VODs are on
the Web which has an underlying philosophy of sharing,
collaboration and democratization. Being able to express your
own voice. Citizen journalism ties into all this.
Spoken Word and Pictures
You should either storyboard your short piece or cut the actual
pictures into a sequence before you write your script. The
script, remember, is to support the pictures.
You script should relate to the pictures. However, your script
should not repeat what is obvious by looking at the picture.
This is just as we discussed above with the example of a picture
of a traffic jam.
Your words need to either enrich what the picture is saying or
focus its meaning into something more specific.
More about VOD Presentation Scripts
These tips are focused on writing scripts for news, factual or
corporate presentation vodcasts. In many ways this is a good
foundation for scripting vodcasts.
However, writing drama and feature vodcasts will take many of
these rules and develop them further. We will be publishing
more tips later on other forms of vodcasting.
Script Mechanics
If you have autocue or teleprompt, you will read your script
from that. However, if not, you may find yourself reading from
paper.
The key to making it easy to read is using a serif font and
double spacing it so it is easy for your eye to recognize the
words. Use capitals for names and complicated words as this
tends to slow your reading down.
When you lay your VOD script out, create two columns. The left
column should describe the picture on screen and the right-hand
column, the text.
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